I hope having small house and where in
there has swimming pool and large garden around my house. I want to build dream
house with two floors. And when in the second floor, i and with my family can
relax seeing garden and swimming pool. I will give my dream house Korean kitchen.
If I really has dream house I will very
happy. And I give my living room with vase and many flowers and feel so very
cool. In the living room I will put the cozy sofa and smooth in order to make
my guest feel comfortable, and enjoy being in my dream house. And I put many
miniature in the every room. I will put big LED television in the family room
in order to me and my family to relax. In the bathroom I will give the bathtub
and shower, and I will give pebbles in the floor and glass door.
Good description but here, for the sentence 'I will put big LED television in the family room in order to me and my family to relax. ' I find it confusing to be understood but I think you wanted to say that you will put a big LED tv in the family room so you and your family can enjoy it and being relaxed there? Right? So maybe you can change your sentence to be like this. 'I will put an LED Tv so me and my family can enjoy watching Tv and relax. Just suggesting
BalasHapusthanl's for your suggestion
BalasHapusAnd when in the second floor, i and with my family can relax seeing garden and swimming.
BalasHapusyou must choose one word of "and" or "with".
you say"i and with my family
become"i and my family" or "i and my family"